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05/23/13
Sad but too real picture of many broken relationships. The ringing of the doorbell, the picture of Jesus, and the question "How many times?" all come together to make a good read, as well as right on topic.
05/24/13
Such a sad story but wonderfully written and tragically a picture of all- too-frequent family rifts. Your fonal words of Dora's prayer - so true. Excellent writing.
05/24/13
An incredibly sobering story that will hold a splash of reality to those who have the pleasure of reading it. Touching, troubling, and yet a truly inspiring ending filled with hope.

Thank you, and a winner in my eyes!

God bless~
05/24/13
This is a gripping and well-written story which I found very moving. Thanks for sharing it. Well done!
06/02/13
You wrote an amazing piece about how resentment can create irreparable damage and how prayer is one of the best methods of overcoming.
I actually had a surreal dream a few nights ago that I was yelling across a chasm at some folks (don't know who they were) who were hassling me-
I think my rather boisterous and raucous dream avatar said something like,
"Well you can't stop me form praying for you, so there and HA!"
Well done and congrats.