The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice take on Naaman going to get his leprosy healed. You've got great rhymes in this and it took me a while to figure out who you were talking about.

I recognized him by his pride immediately. What a great message here on forsaking pride to follow Christ.
Very creative of you to turn this story of Naaman's leprosy into a remarkable poem. In it you've shown how bravery and victory in war cannot compete with obedience to the Word of God.
Congratulations on ranking 22 overall!