The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/13
I must say I enjoyed this story. You give a good background at the beginning and clearly bring in the topic midway through. You ended it well too. The part about the pastor's "second coming" is very witty. The only thing I might have liked was a little more detail as to how both characters were rattled. But all in all, this is a tale well told. Nice job.
05/20/13
Your clever wit just needed to soak in a bit, I think. I'm sure he never forgot that helping hand, offered in Jesus' name (literally). I enjoyed reading this smile-saturated bit of history. :)
You describe well the inner movement of the thoughts and feelings of the POV character! Makes you feel like you are inside his head and skin. Good work!
05/23/13
Loved the way you wrapped up this interesting and entertaining tale...nicely done. God bless~
You have such a delightful sense of humor, but this story also shows what a big heart you have (faux pas and all:) Congratulations on ranking 19 overall!