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05/20/13
Interesting twist! Great job with dialogue.
05/21/13
Interesting story with a cute conclusion. Nicely done.
God bless~
05/23/13
Reminds me of a modern day "morality" story in which the characters personify moral qualities (such as "lucrative") or abstractions (as death or youth) and in which moral lessons are taught.


The morality plays originated in medieval Europe, first appearing in the 1400s, and was typically of a Christian nature.

Among the most common themes is that one should avoid the seven deadly sins: pride, lust, greed, envy, wrath, sloth and gluttony.

You certainly showed that young men should avoid "greed."

Nice job! I enjoyed reading it!