The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/13
Great work here. I love the rhymes and the message. You do a great job combining different Bible stories: disciples in the boat, Jonah, the earthquake when Jesus gave His life to save us. The rhymes are amazing and you've definitely nailed the topic. I look forward to reading more work like this.
05/22/13
This entry could easily get overlooked. You need to find a better title so people stop to read it. It is awesome! Great job!