The Official Writing Challenge
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Teaching moments and a teacher that knew how to use them. The smooth flow of this story and the delightful characters you created delivered a joyful read and a thoughtful message. Well done.
05/18/13
I'm enjoyed reading this and see the characters come alive. Wonderful choice of words that relates to all ages. Great job!
05/21/13
Nice job, I enjoyed this entry very much. Thanks.
God bless~
05/23/13
Excellent story. I am a teacher (in a public school), and I love the moments when I get to share words of wisdom that God provides; whether they know it or not.

You had me waiting to the very end for the answer the teacher would provide. Nice work!
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