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05/16/13
The guilt some innocent children carry can be devastating until they find the source--like your MC. Thankful that this piece ended on such a joy-filled note.
I enjoyed the time frame of this story. Good job.
05/17/13
This is excellent, a compelling story though sad in places. I like how Julie finds peace at the end to calm her torment. God's Word is a wonderful source of comfort.
Such a tender story, containing such a powerful message.
Wonderful . . .
Congratulations on ranking 24 overall!