The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/13
Very descriptive, with credible interaction between your characters. Loved the touch of irony that wraos it up. A good fun read.
05/12/13
This was so entertaining and a sheer delight to read. The conclusion was pure fun and clevery crafted. Well done. God bless~
Very imaginative. And I love it that Grandpa gets to save the day because he knows how a steering wheel works! Who knows what the future holds. I mean, the Wright brothers first flight was only a little over 100 years ago, and look what we are doing.
A very pleasing read.Grandpa was supercool. I especially loved the opening line about the dentures exposed like a screaming donkey. That image will remain for a while. Well done
05/16/13
Oh boy, was this a trip. You did an explosive job and made me laugh. Marvelous science fiction. Congrats on your 3rd place EC!
Congrats on a thoroughly entertaining submission. I love a good science fiction story. Well done!
Way cool! A delight! Congratulations!
A very creative work. I love the grandpa's prayer for forgiveness for known and unknown sins.
Congratulations.