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Topic: Sizzle (05/02/13)
TITLE: Fiery Beauty
By Allison Egley
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"I'm in love."
"You are, huh? Who's the uh... lucky lady?"
"I don't know her name."
Austin raised an eyebrow. "You're in love, but you don't know her name?"
"Nope. I see her walking down the hall ever day after this class, and I finally got the courage to talk to her. I said 'Hi!' And do you know what she did next?"
Darren cut him off. "She said 'Hi!' And she smiled at me."
"So what does she look like?"
"She's beautiful. Stunning. Hot. No, she's more than hot. She's.... sizzling!"
Austin bit his lip to keep from laughing. "Sizzling, huh?"
"Yep. Sizzling. She has this bright red hair that's kind of... wild. It looks like a sizzling fire. Her bright red toe nails peek out from her sandals. Then there's her body. And her smile. Yeah. She's just... sizzling."
"You normally see her after this class? Maybe I'll walk to your next class with you and you can show me."
"Sure. But right now, Ms. Trimble is starting class, so we'd better be quiet. The only time <i>she's</i> sizzling is when she's mad. And we both know we don't want that."
Austin nodded knowingly. "I'm right there with you, bro."
The bell rang, and Austin followed Darren. Darren pointed. "There. Right there. See her? With the red hair?"
Austin strained his neck until he caught sight of her. He stopped in his tracks and held out his arm, holding Darren back. "Darren, that's my sister. And I have two words for you. Hands. Off. Actually, I have a few more words for you. If you <i>don't</i> keep your hands off and leave her alone, you'll have to deal with me. And I'll make sure <i>you</i> will be the one sizzling, if you catch my drift. Caphice?"
Darren's eyes grew wide, as he threw his hands up in the air. "Caphice. No problem. I won't touch her I promise. Just tell me one thing... What's her name?"
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