The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/13
King David, the poet, would be proud.
05/11/13
Wow- this was so good...it brought Psalms to mind, and moved me greatly. Excellent job!

God bless~
This poem is evenly and beautifully crafted. A delight to read. Thank you for it, and for all the work that must have gone into it. Well done.
Beautiful. Wish you had room for Nathan and the poor man's lamb. Wonderful to point to Psalms 51 - the true penitential prose of David . . .
Congratulations on ranking 22 overall!