The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/13
Great story...I would love to read the book! As usual, you write an interesting, humorous, well done piece! Great take on the topic.

BLessings, Lynn
05/11/13
Loved your word "play." You did a great job staying on topic.

The idea of coal looking for sparks is quite clever. Nicely done.
05/11/13
Nicely done and nicely written. This was an interesting and clever entry. I enjoyed the last line especially!

God bless~
This is a winner! How clever, how wonderful the characters, and how HOT the story! Well done . . .
I think you nailed the genre here. The pacing and short senrences and phrasing are perfect. You packed quite a bit of topic reference in here!Very funny and quite an entertaining read. Well done.
05/12/13
I'm smiling. Nice job.
05/12/13
That was a grand ride on the word play train! Unique, fresh, and ultimately entertaining.
This story made me chuckle! What a wonderfully entertaining read! Well written, funny, witty and fresh.
05/16/13
Congrats!
Congrats on your HC! I knew you would "track down" a win.
Congratulations on ranking 4 in your level and 28 overall!