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A really prolific entry with a clever approach to the topic. I love stories with Biblical reference, and this was no different, loved it.

Nicely done. God bless~
Excellent descriptions and vivid imagery. Powerful piece - and I LOVE Biblical fiction.
Fiery, descriptive writing. Powerful images. Great job!
Great job. I love your take on Elijah. Never before had I pictured the fire creating all those ash heaps. Wow!
What a beautiful take on Elijah! Congratulations!
Congratulations! You pulled me into the scene before I even realized what scene it was. Excellent writing.
A carefully crafted biblica fiction. Congratulations!
Wow the picture you drew with that one line "Fifty-one ash heaps lay as evidence of where power pulsated without limit," was stunning. I savored it for a bit. Thank you for the pleasure and congratulations.