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05/11/13
Wow - this was a powerful and distrubing story, because it's happened far too many times for my heart to handle throughout the years during the hot summer months. There is usually one or two of such stories on the news. I pray for the innocent children and little animals that so often are victims of such senseless scenarios.

Prolific and realistic ending with the husband aching, yet forgiving. Great story!

God bless~
05/13/13
Powerful story - no subtletly about it. Well done.
Congratulations on ranking 9 in your level and 13 overall!