The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/13
I felt like I was reading someone's diary as the MC let the reader into this current chapter of her life. I liked the symbolism of fresh beginnings-- when the MC noticed that their first apartment had been demolished in the time it took to dissolve the legal ties of the marriage. This was nicely paced and well-written. Also liked how you pointed out that the MC did not take their marriage vows lightly--and sought advice through prayers, from clergy and friends before agreeing to end the marriage.
05/11/13
A very powerful entry with so much emotions and meaning. Well done, and very metaphorical with the last line, great job!

God bless~