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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Drip (04/25/13)

TITLE: Sweet Sounds Forevermore~
By Camille (C D) Swanson
05/02/13


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The annoying sound of a drip gave way to reflection
catapulting my thoughts into an array of splendor
His countenance the antithesis of annoyance brought
a warmth of assurance as it wrapped around my soul

His essence sweet and forgiving with love never ending
the image of the Lamb of God offering His sacrifice for
our salvation overcomes my senses too difficult to grasp
the powerful and Sovereign God who is always with us

The actual account of a prolific life of One who visited us
the very One who provides all we need and more
as we bask in His magnificent glory and radiance
the One who offers us the living water...thirst no more

No annoying sounds in heaven or a relentless drip
only sounds of salvation in Holy accord as we
worship in unison the Lord of Lords and King of Kings
sweet sounds of song as we sit in His love forever more


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Linda Goergen05/04/13
Love how you gave the image of an annoying water drip being transformed into the image of Living Water, dripping into your spirit and drenching you in love and praise and longing for Heaven! The image truly blessed me!
Brenda Rice 05/05/13
Nicely done. You creatively turned an annoying sound into something beautiful.


Thanks for sharing.
Pam Ford Davis 05/08/13
Beautiful words reveal beautiful worship...

Wing His Words!
Dannie Hawley 05/09/13
Wow, this is super! I'll not be able to hear a drip of water with the same annoyance again. I'll always be thinking of your poem. I love that about a good piece of writing, don't you? It just stays with you, and this will do that for a long time. Congratulations on the H.C. Well done!
lynn gipson 05/09/13
Mighty congrats! on a beautiful and fine piece of writing. I true testament to Christ. Thank you so much for sharing this exceptional poem.

BLessings, Lynn
Pam Ford Davis 05/09/13
Congratulations!

Keep Winging His Words...
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 05/09/13
Wow this is powerful. It takes real talent to use a word like antithesis in a poem! Congratulations on placing 5 in your level and 16 overall! Happy Dance!!
Patsy Hallum05/11/13
Great message poem! Congratulations on the HC and placing in group.Keep Writing!