The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/13
I'm so impressed with the way you used each of the five senses, relating to different "drips." That coffee one really got to me. :) And I LOVE the final stanza, God's grace and blessings, "unmerited favor" indeed! Your words are uplifting.
05/06/13
Lovely use of all the senses in painting this poetic picture. Wonderful!