The Official Writing Challenge
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Whoa! This was so well written. You kept my attention all the way through. Great job!
05/04/13
Nice story! It had an old-timey feel, like a Mark Twain piece. Well done!
05/04/13
You kept me on my toes as I read the plot. Then when the Lion showed up on the scene I gasped thinking what will the outcome be in this intriguing story. Your ending was perfect. Whoa!
05/04/13
Fascinating story. I'm glad they found the boy!
05/06/13
This was a fabulously entertaining jaunt through the hills. Your characters jumped off the screen. Well done!
As usual, your story hooks and holds. Love the dialogue. Creative and exciting throughout. I love the line "He can track a whisper across a frozen lake." So well done. And by the way, how do you you come up with these stories?
05/09/13
Congratulations on your EC!
05/09/13
Congratulations Virgil, your stories never fail to satisfy!
I Love your take on this. Your character are exquisite! The suspense is grand. Congratulations! Happy Dance!
You are surely blessed with winning articles. This is one of them. Congratulations!
05/09/13
Riveting story all the way through, with well-drawn characters and a real rug-puller to close. Totally believable - and I loved the picture of tracking a whisper across a frozen lake. Well-deserved placing, congratulations.
05/10/13
Congratulations on your EC place for this. Well-deserved! Your story was full of drama and kept me reading to find out what happened. Your characters' language is well-done and they are very believable. Well done1!
05/10/13
Congratulations Virgil. Love this. Great job! God bless!