The Official Writing Challenge
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The last line - perfection!
05/05/13
Well done story illustrating the Proverbs scripture about a quarrelsome wife. The vision and emotion of Jacob’s frustration was imparted to the reader, beginning to end, bringing the scripture to life! Clever way to use the topic!
So well written--I love this!
Oh what a delight this was! I've been in one of the slumps myself lately. Bless my husband too as he puts up with my anxiety as we get ready to go on vacation. Loved your characters and maybe I'll be able to tone it down some for hubby's sake. Though I bet he wished I had read this several hours earlier! Congratulations on placing 30 overall!
Ooops I meant 25 overall! Sorry :)