The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/05
How wonderfully creative, leaves the reader begging. Bravo.
11/15/05
What do they say....One man's trash is another man's treasure? I'm glad God sees the treasure in each of us:)
11/16/05
Really nice. I felt for the object as though it were human.
There are many of us who certainly identify with this object. How craetive and realistic? I have learnt an important lesson: Refine it before you define it. This was a good one.
Interesting perspective of the topic! This speaks of love, hope, resurrection... "beautiful" stuff. :-)
11/18/05
Very very nice parable story!
11/19/05
Great lesson wrapped up in such a cute story. Great job.
11/19/05
Ah, such poignant truth in this story. Great job!
11/19/05
Yes, like the shopkeeper sometimes I don't see the treasure before me or, worse still, am too lazy to find the beauty under layers of ugliness. Sigh. A tightly written story that packs a punch. Well done. Yeggy
11/19/05
I'm a harsh critic with a short attention span - but your story kept me intrigued to the end. Very good story and well written.