The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh I loved this You had me chuckling and smiling from beginning to end. Your opening was the perfect hook and your pacing the perfect rate for this poor MC's whirling mind.

I noticed some tiny things like no hyphens in mother-in-law.

I probably shouldn't admit this, but I will and maybe it will inspire you. I had my mind focused on next week's topic as I had just proofed a story. When you got to the part about taking a breaking from diapers and breastfeeding I knew right where you were going. I wish you could have seen my face when I read the word click. :) Now it may be that only a mom might understand where I am going. It was a bonus laugh when I realized the topic wasn't drip but click. And you did a delightful job of writing on that topic! Thanks for filling my evening with some chuckles and laughter.
Smile - this made me chuckle.
Congratulations on placing 9 in your level and 15 overall!