The Official Writing Challenge
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04/29/13
Well put together, although a bit "over the top," that is to say, an easy solution to the problem. I thought there would be more on the tardiness since you led with that. I liked the overall story.
04/30/13
Sometimes children are the ideal ones to lead other kids to Christ.
Thank you.
I think you did a nice job with this one. It's a clever take on the topic and fresh too. The message is a powerful one too Good job!