The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/13
Great story, shows how addicted some are to a computor and how hard it is to be an army brat! Keep writing
04/30/13
It's difficult living in a different time zone, but if not overused, computers keep friends connected. Thank you.
I really liked this story. I think the friend was quite wise. I'm not sure she would have been as happy in the end, perhaps leaving it open-ended might have been an idea (though after reading my story this week i plan on rewriting the ending so I know how hard it is to come up with an ending in 750 words. I loved every other part of it. You did a great job of pulling in the topic and I think you really showed the characters and made them feel real.
Congratulations on placing 8TH in your level and 29 overall!