The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/13
This is a thrilling story. You did a nice job of setting the scene and building the character. I've read so many similar stories like this recently. I think it is a fear that many echo. You did a nice job of weaving the topic throughout the story too.
04/30/13
Eerie, because we know the end is near. We know this scene could be true soon.
05/02/13
Congratulations on placing 10 in your level and 16 overall!