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What a profound story. I could feel the MC's pain and understand the resolve to be different from her mother. I was so blessed with such a great mom, I can forget that not everyone is that fortunate.

Tiny red ink, I noticed that you wrote compliment instead of complement. That same word was one of my first constructive critiques here at FW. I had never even realized there were two different spellings and was so grateful for that red ink. :)

You did a great job with this. I especially appreciated the MC's hindsight. It speaks volumes about her personality, endearing her to me.
04/30/13
Great character study - from the POV of a teenager and then again as an adult. Well done.
04/30/13
Very nice and an interesting story. This is an excellent take on the topic "click" and so well written! I love the joyful, happy ending.
Congratulations for ranking 33 overall!