The Official Writing Challenge
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Yeah. I liked it. The poetry people will probably say something about a beat, but it worked for me.
Good Poem, One red ink, 5th verse, I believe there is an unneeded "to" in there. Keep Writing!
As with all poetry, some will absolutely love this, and some with think it so-so. It's the hearts that relate, who will be touched. God has given you this gift for a grand purpose. One day we'll meet all those whose lives were touched by our poetry. I think you made God smile. Keep on writing!
This is a powerful piece. I know that feeling of despair and hopelessness. I loved how you started in a very dark place yet left the reader with hope. Beautiful.