The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/13
I always enjoyed spinning the jacks more than catching them... I never was that good at playing the game the right way... thanks for a sweet object lesson... and thanks for the memories.
This is a great story. It shows how many times that we think we will do the teaching and instead are taught a valuable lessons. I noticed a tiny mistake like in this line: I thought to myself a week earlier you should have the word had between I had thought.

Overall this is a great story. You covered the topic in a fresh and meaningful way. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
05/01/13
I hadn't thought about jacks in years and how much I loved playing jacks as a kid. Love the story. Good job. God bless!
05/02/13
Congratulations Claudia! Great job. God bless!
05/02/13
Congratulations on a great piece of work and on your 4th place EC win!
05/02/13
Lovely, touching story of how our plans are often not His plans.
Congratulations on your EC placing.
05/02/13
What a wonderful story about perspective. I can see why you placed so high. Congratulations!
05/03/13
Congratulations! I love this sweet story and could easily visualize the whole scene. A well-deserved win.
Great lesson in this story. Well done. Congrats on your win!