The Official Writing Challenge
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04/22/13
Enjoyed your verses ... nicely done, and keep a tissue handy.
04/23/13
You made my nose twitch with an itch just reading this. Although your rhyme is fine, I suggest trying to match the lines. Experiment with a variation of patterns of rhyme and rhythms. Poetry is like a puzzle - making the words fit just right. Keep it up!
04/23/13
This is a nice little bit of fun, but from your sneeze I sure will run!
Cute!