The Official Writing Challenge
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Great idea, an allergic bee!
One mistake, of that should have been off. It was a very interesting piece. Keep Writing!
I like this one. Mostly it trips along quite easily, and the pictures are easy to see. Keep writing. God bless you.
I enjoyed this fun and creative poem. The title drew me in and I was not disappointed. This was cute and I liked how you tied it into scripture at the conclusion. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
I especially liked the last stanza, "if your life is one big hurdle...". It is really encouraging and I found the old-fashioned imagery (tightening the girdle etc) quite amusing. Yes - very nicely done.
Too cute! My voluminous skirts are gathered . . .
Congratulations on ranking 9 in your level and 33 overall!