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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Achoo (04/11/13)

TITLE: Germs are coming straight for you
By Dana Anders
04/16/13


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“Achoo!”
Someone sneezes and the germs fill the air.
What to do?
Hold my breath and hope it doesn’t come my way.
What to do?
Pretend I didn’t hear it and there are no germs.
What to do?
Hide away and cocoon myself from nasty germs.

Choices, choices, everywhere
Germs, germs, fill the air
What to do? What to do?
Thinking, thinking, through and through.

“Achoo!”
“Achoo!”
“Achoo!”
Germs are looking at you.
Run, hide or squeal
You’d better decide what to do.

“Achoo!”
“Achoo!”
“Achoo!”
Germs are all around.
Run, hide or squeal
Safety can’t be found.

Choices, choices, everywhere
Germs, germs, fill the air
What to do? What to do?
Germs are coming straight for you.

Ha! I am prepared and will fight!
Victory is in the Lord and is my right.
I look not right or left, nor do I squeal
To my Lord and Saviour I just make appeal

Ha? What’s that? Oh – yes – I can do that
Pray for the sick and knock germs flat
Eat well and exercise to keep this temple strong
And not panic when things may go wrong.

“Achoo!”
“Achoo!”
“Achoo!”
Germs are all around
But in Jesus is my comfort found.


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dub W04/22/13
"Germs are all around
But in Jesus is my comfort found."

Yup

I enjoyed the patter.
Yvonne Blake 04/23/13
I love the analogy of the germs being temptations. Well written.
Judith Gayle Smith04/24/13
Love the rhyming . . .