The Official Writing Challenge
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04/20/13
I'm glad your MC decided to see God's smile instead of Philberta's eyebrows. Everything in life looks worse when we are focused on the negative, and forget to see the blessings all around us.
I could not stop laughing; and I read this one out loud to my husband whose "interesting" sound repertoire is topped by snoring. Thank you for the good fun, and the realization of blessing too!
I loved the whole tone of this piece! It was honest, real, hilarious... As my pastor says, "People are people." You've gotta love em. I agree with Christina, I am glad the MC decided to look at her blessings, God's smile in all of this instead of callous old what's her name. I loved the way you spelled Achoo in this piece too. Sneezes can sound all kinds of ways. Great job! Very entertaining with a super message. Blessings to you...
This is a winner! Delightful, fun and sweet.