The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/05
We are more than the sum total of our parts. We see now as through a mirror that is shrouded, but one day we will see clearly, who God has created us to become. Great poem:)
We are the image of God, we are beautiful and that is why we are not allowed a fraction of an ounce of pride. Pride did Lucifer in.
11/15/05
Very creative attempt. Watch the beat in free verse. Good message - who are we really...
11/16/05
A timeless question that sets the true seeker on an amazing journey of discovery. Thanks for the reminder that I'm still on that journey. Yeggy
11/17/05
Really enjoyed this - I liked the answers to that question that we all have.
11/23/05
I really liked your piece based around the age old question of 'Who am I?' What a wonderful conclusion you come to!