The Official Writing Challenge
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Yeah - this good. A couple tweaks, drop some redundancies, and you have a dandy here.
Ha Ha... Showers of Blessing! You developed the character of Sal very well.
Liked this one. Very entertaining. Why is it though that used car salesman are always portrayed as 'dishonest'...? Anyway, I like the way you finished the story too. I would actually like to hear more from this guy with the nose - he sounds like he has more than one good story to tell.
Hysterical! I see a winner here . . .
I like your character Sal. You developed him so well I believe I might know him. This was hysterical. Thank you.
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