The Official Writing Challenge
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04/20/13
Yeah - this good. A couple tweaks, drop some redundancies, and you have a dandy here.
04/23/13
Ha Ha... Showers of Blessing! You developed the character of Sal very well.
04/23/13
Liked this one. Very entertaining. Why is it though that used car salesman are always portrayed as 'dishonest'...? Anyway, I like the way you finished the story too. I would actually like to hear more from this guy with the nose - he sounds like he has more than one good story to tell.
Hysterical! I see a winner here . . .
04/24/13
I like your character Sal. You developed him so well I believe I might know him. This was hysterical. Thank you.
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