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Delightful throughout, and I love the ending!
04/20/13
Very fun poem. Thank you.
Very funny poem; and the visual layout shapes it too, as it sort of inhales and exhales!
Very clever -- like the way we can all "feel" that "Achoo!" at the end of your piece though you never directly state it. You quite perfectly describe the human sneeze throughout, have a nice rhyme scheme as well, and I like the way the last stanza is pictured as "the sneeze tumbling out" in a sort of water-fall form. Great job with this forceful entry (ha)!
04/24/13
As an allergy sufferer I am delighted to learn my bothersome symptoms make lovely prose. Good job. God bless!
An absolutely delightful read!
04/25/13
Vonnie, I love your progression of thought (and of the sneeze) It was completely entertaining. The ending was PERFECT! :) I'm smiling.
Congratulations on ranking 32 overall!