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Almost bordered on funny, but the reality of the situation made it special. Proof your entry in preview and some spacing issues might clear up.
Smile - God uses all kinds of things to bring us to Him.
I love the way you built up the tension in the opening sentences (and the use of rhyme), and then the chaos that ensued after the sneeze. I felt like I was there!
A wonderful story. The rhythm and rhyme of the first three lines almost sound like poetry.

I really like how the totally unexpected sneeze provides a little humor in the midst of a serious moment. Good job with this!
Unigue. Your MC is sweet and huggable . . .
That's one conversions no one would soon forget.
I loved your article on Saved! It has humor in it along with how God uses all things even a sneeze to show us the way! What a special story to be told. Thank you, Cinda