The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 323 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
04/20/13
Wonderfully gripping story, and a conflict that too many parents have had to live through. The service dog was a nice touch— my wife has one. Good work.
04/20/13
Gripping and realistic. I know parents who have lost a child, and the horror they go through. Your approach was right-on.
04/22/13
Perfect title for this interesting story of inner conflict. This piece held my attention from start to finish--and I'm so glad it had a happy ending. Good job.
04/22/13
I literally felt the fear your MC was dealing with. Great story, with a wonderful ending.
04/23/13
wow! this is beyond excellent. So enthralling, imaginative and touching -wow!
This is a fantastic story. You do such a great job of pulling the reader into the story then keeping the suspense and tension at the perfect pace. From beginning g to end you had my attention. This is a great read!
Exquisite. Poignant. Heart rending.
04/24/13
The suspense in this article was well crafted. You captured appropriately the difficulty one has in moving from a time of trauma to being comfortable with life again. I enjoyed this story.