The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/13
Very cute!
This is adorable. You had me hooked from the very beginning. I think the POV was super clever. The only red ink I have, I'm sure you spotted by now, carefully should have been careful. You had by attention the whole time and the b a t h thing is hysterical because my dog has learned to spell that too.
04/14/13
Cute! I could picture this story illustrated with some adorable pictures for a childrenís book.
04/15/13
Sweet...and well done.

God bless~
An interesting piece on topic. This is a nice one! Thanks for sharing.
Delightful!