The Official Writing Challenge
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This is fantastic. You had me smiling at so many different points. Part of me was torn from wanting the Mom to tell the truth to liking the get rich American Dream story. I think you handled the topic in a brilliant and fresh way too. This was a fun read.
04/12/13
Oh my! What a riot! Your writing skill made this humorous piece a pleasure to read and completely entertaining. You even made me want a genuine Randal painting. :) Love this!
04/17/13
Smiling really wide over here! : ) Great job with this delightful tale. Loved it!

God bless~
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