The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/13
This is so lovely the words just flow off the page. You make writing poetry look easy and I know it is anything but. I understand the reasoning of not having more punctuation, but I did feel myself needing to reread a line or two where I think a period or comma would have prevented that, especially in the second stanza. Overall the this is beautiful, the message is stunning. This has so touched my heart.
04/17/13
You conveyed lots in such a short poem. Pretty awesome!
04/17/13
Simply brilliant! I adore this! God bless~