The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/13
Very moving and heartfelt piece.
I was expecting him to toss a stone in her memory, but your ending was ironclad offering the painful truth of life and love. Very good work.
04/11/13
I sure hope this is straight fiction, because I ache inside. Thanks for digging deep! Great story.
04/13/13
This touched me deeply...profound and powerful.

God Bless~
04/15/13
Very hard to leave a comment when you are crying and typing at the same time - talk about tugging on the heartstrings! How is it possible to still be alive when you are in so much pain? This a question that haunts many - including me- and I am reminded of the very real suffering of many people. A powerful story.
04/18/13
Congratulations on ranking 20 overall! (The highest rankings can be found in the message boards)
04/20/13
You took my heart and made it yours. This is beautiful and breathtakingly heart melting. Congratulations!
04/22/13
This is a tender, painful story which is very well written. Congratulations on your HC.
04/23/13
Thank you all for you very encouraging words!