The Official Writing Challenge
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Amen! The message of this piece is wonderful; the heart's need, the plea, the restoration and cleansing and the joy of wholeness. A few of the rhymes sounded just a little bit forced, but the message made up for that. Good job.
Love the poem, love the message, love the words, love everything. This is a fine testament to HIs love and glory.

Great Job!
I enjoyed this lovely piece, beautiful job, and your heart for God apparent.

God bless~
This is quite lovely. You did a nice job of going from a dark place where I think many people can feel trapped in, to the wonderful light with Jesus. Nice job.
I like the way you have written this in a way that is accessible to many readers. You can really just 'get it'. Well done.
I love the story, but, the reading is awkward the way its punctuated or not. I do pray you keep writing though.
yaaay awesome so true we need to look up when we are feeling down thanks for commenting on my poem