The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow . . . what a testimony . . . or is it a story? Do tell!
Wonderful testimony...There is nothing quite like that feeling of being baptized, but you did a nice job of telling. God bless~
Your storyline really hooked me in. But I was left a little disappointed at the end as I was unsure if you reunited with your husband and if he overcame his drinking problem. As you can tell, I love happy endings! Anyway, the fact that I wanted to know more is surely a good thing - you will have to turn this piece into a longer story!
Need to know more! You packed quite a bit into 750 words - enough to hook me and hunger for the rest of the story.