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Not sure I'd be so gracious about the bucket of water - midsummer soak :) But I enjoyed the story, as it resonated with aspects of my own life. You use dialogue really well - I would guess you have a real talent for narrative. Well done.
Your writing really captured the mood of a happy, contented family; and with a smooth flow into the message about trusting Jesus in the storms. Thank you for a lovely warm up-building story
Nice job with this interesting story that delivered a special message. I enjoyed it. Thanks.

God bless~
Very nice piece. I like the way you incorporated the scripture into the story. I'm trying the same sort of thing in a novel, if I ever actually get it right that is. This has a good family feel to it that many will relate to. Good work.