The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/13
This was a fine story with a fantastic message. I especially loved this part:

"Dull my sharp tongue. Help me to be an encourager, not a discourager.”

I am sure everyone reading this can relate and knows someone like Della...or are "Della-esque" themselves.

Good job.

God bless~
03/16/13
What a lovely story. I like the way you wove the sharp theme throughout the story and the spiritual truth contained within about how we use our tongue.

03/20/13
I really enjoyed the story and thought your characters were realistic and delightful. Although sometimes dreams can be overused as a literary device, I think you used yours in just the right way and God does talk to us through our dreams. The last paragraph was perfect. It had me smiling and giggling. You did a great job.
03/22/13
Congratulations on ranking 28th overall! Happy Dance!!