The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/13
A wonderful approach to the topic at hand. This was so well written and moving in so many ways. Nice job.

God bless~
Enjoyed the retelling of this story ...wanted more.
03/16/13
Your application of the sword in the front of the story gave a very visible picture of the power of the Word of God.

Enjoyed this very much.

I think you did a great job of bringing the story to life. I love the descriptions of the spiders and the mice scampering about. It made it all feel so real to me. I also think you did a great job of covering the topic while still sharing the message from the Bible. Great job of writing a delightful story.
03/21/13
Nice touch on the topic from a very different perspective.
Congratulations on ranking 30 overall!