The Official Writing Challenge
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03/10/13
I love your message. First impressions are not always the best way to tell what a person is really like.

The story line was marginally "tied" to the topic, and I think you used too much dialogue, which in my opinion, did not strengthen the story line.

Your title reminds me of something my Mom loved say.
"There's always two sides to every story."
03/10/13
loved to say.
03/12/13
I liked how you showed your message in this story - of looking beyond the first impressions. Well written.
A fitting title,great story line and memorable characters punctuated by a ending that satisfies. Well done.
Congratulations on coming in #29 over all. You always create memorable characters. There was a little too much dialogue to wade through for me but the ending was fabulous. I think it is so easy for one to just up and leave some place if things don't seem to work out right away when sometimes that can be exactly where God wants us. Much needed message especially for our times. Blessings and have a beautiful Lord's day!
Congratulations on ranking 29 overall!