The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I like this one a lot. Nice take on the topic. Loved the last line, "clean of sole and soul". Clever. Thanks for sharing. God Bless.
03/12/13
Great detail, and a fresh perspective on a well-known, and so important, tale.
Very enjoyable read. I liked this familiar story told from the unfamiliar POV of Andrew. You had some really nice word pictures: sparkles rippling, ragged beard, strong, hairy arms...I loved the "dignified watchdogs" and "ornate watchdogs. Nice. I like the use of the short, poem-like sentences too, varying the rythm. Well done.
Congratulations on ranking 37 overall!