The Official Writing Challenge
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A poingnant and insightful read. Thank you.

God bless~
Nice personal narrative. Good job. : )
"What I do know is that the land of my citizenship is free from the things that have marred my citizenship here. Things like strife. Wars. Illness. Death. And taxes! My new country has streets paved with gold, they say. And when I get there I will be forever more with my Savior. Or Saviour."

So true. Good job. Keep writing.
I liked how you took a personal experience and transitioned to an eternal lesson. Well done.
Beautifully written. I couldn't lift my eyes from the screen/page. You have so natural a way of writing - as if you are speaking the words. I love this. Canada is so lovely - thank you for the visit. God bless you . . .
Congratulations on ranking 28 overall!