The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a great job with this allegory. I think you were able to set the scene just right. The Bible verse accented the story but would never become just an accent. This is a clever, well-written work of art.
This was simply written, yet brilliant at the same time! Great job. Thanks.

God bless
Wow. The ending caught me by surprise. How true that we are so capable of great passion in the "honeymoon" moments, and then forget to Whom we are married and why.

Loving you in through and because of Jesus, the Christ . . .

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