The Official Writing Challenge
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03/02/13
The young MC went a long way to get their attention! Well written entry. I'm glad the father didn't get upset when she appeared, although he had the right to, that was a really mean and scary trick to do to anyone, let alone the parents! WOW. I never expected that ending. So good job.

God bless~
03/02/13
I really enjoyed this. Held my attention throughout and it had a great ending. Good job.
Way to go. Had me going all the way to the end. Loved it!
This thrilled and charmed me. What a precious ending! What a precocious child. Did you do this to your unsuspecting parents perchance?
I still love this piece. Even though i had read it earlier I could still feel the suspense building up. You did a great job.
03/08/13
You have such a great imagination! Well done!!