The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a delight. I totally can relate to the MC and I think you did an excellent job of allowing me to peek inside her head.

I did notice some typos and missing words that I'm sure you picked up on by now and are having a ? moment. I love the ? moment but wonder how it would translate to someone who needs the story read aloud. Perhaps even writing it out like a question mark moment might help that.

You had me smiling and I so enjoy that subtle tongue-in-cheek humor. You definitely were on topic and that the fact that these are based on true "duh" moments made it even more delightful.
This was fast, moving and compelling...It also held some brief moments of levity which made me smile.
Nicely done.

I enjoyed it. God bless~
I hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I loved reading it! Sheer novelty! Would make a terrific novel on the insanities (albeit sweet) of life in a nursing home.

Loving you in through and because of Jesus, the Christ . . .

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Congratulations on ranking 9 in Masters and 18 overall!