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This was a delight. I totally can relate to the MC and I think you did an excellent job of allowing me to peek inside her head.

I did notice some typos and missing words that I'm sure you picked up on by now and are having a ? moment. I love the ? moment but wonder how it would translate to someone who needs the story read aloud. Perhaps even writing it out like a question mark moment might help that.

You had me smiling and I so enjoy that subtle tongue-in-cheek humor. You definitely were on topic and that the fact that these are based on true "duh" moments made it even more delightful.
03/02/13
This was fast, moving and compelling...It also held some brief moments of levity which made me smile.
Nicely done.

I enjoyed it. God bless~
I hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I loved reading it! Sheer novelty! Would make a terrific novel on the insanities (albeit sweet) of life in a nursing home.

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